Long ago, there was a kid who was supposed to be a fire controller just as his father, his name: Arnaud.
At his 8 birthday - when it was supposed that his power have reached maturity and ability to get a manifestation - his father was waiting that manifestation to start training him in the control of his power. His father (who claimed himself "Phyrio") had a friend, who was a controller too (named Marco) and he was his best friend..... with the difference of the element between them, that wasn't problem to them, they knew each other limits and get along very well..... Marco had a girl, a little bit older than Arnaud, who.... we can say, was in love of him, Astoreth.
They had the same problem that their fathers.... Arnaud's power was over the fire, and Astoreth's over water... but they do almost everything together, going to lunch time, going to the park, trips with their parents.... a lot of fun so they don't need to fight because of the power....they get along like their fathers and mothers, like the just married ones.
So the night falls.... and everyone, as expected, went to their own homes to get some rest.... and all of a sudden someone knocked the door of Arnaud's hose (notice that Marco's family hasn't go yet, they live next door);
Phyrio went to open the door and a black dressed guy said to him: "Save yourself" and left quickly..... he stood with the door open, then closed it and turned around to see her wife... kindly kissed her, and gave Arnaud a hug by the time he was giving him his watch... "No matter what happens tonight, I will always try to protect you, take good care of yourself and remember what I and your mother have teach you.... please be a good boy", the Phyrio took Marco's wife, Astoreth and Arnaud to the basement and locked them up.
Then, 4 vans parked in the front of the house and Phyrio, Alicia and Marco went out to face a rain of bullets, which they tried to evade, but there was to many people shooting and just 3 of them.... when Phyrio saw they couldn't win, he started a fire on his own house, and everything nearby the house.... then a bigger explosion came out of the house.... Phyrio screamed "Run away with them, She can control him", but it was to late.... Arnaud had became a killer machine, he set on fire everyone, including the 3 persons he most loved, Astoreth and her mother was unconcious in the basement and he was out of control.... shooters were killed by their own bullets, and when he started to come back, he wanted to save Astoreth, but they were gone, the people sho listen Phyrio's words, went into the flaming house and took Astoreth with them.
Then Arnaud cried and ran away from there to the down part of a bridge...where he stood alone all day and night.....
si pueden notar tome un poco en cuenta lo que me dijeron todos, deje mas espacios.... and this is for the ones who i promised i will put things in english! asi que, disfrutenlo por que la segunda parte de la historia.... y la tercera y la que le sigue estaran para la otra semana, solo la segunda, enjoy the reading and let your imagination flow with this.... mi imaginacion vuela cada vez que leo lo que escribo!
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